I’m trying to get my ducks in a row in terms of legal documentation for my games. I’m not a lawyer, so I’m not going to be able to produce perfect legal jargon. Instead, I’d like to try to avoid problems by making it as human-readable, clear and unambiguous as possible.

Below is what I’ve got so far, plucked and remixed from a few major software providers. Keep in mind this is a work-in-progress draft and is not definitive. The documentation that ships with the final game will supersede anything written here.

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Health & Safety

Please pay attention to your health while playing, and respect your limits.

Seizures

Some portion of the population may experience seizures or blackouts triggered by flashing lights or patterns. Full-screen light flashes may be disabled in the in-game Options menu, but doing so cannot guarantee you will not experience symptoms. If you have an epileptic condition, consult a doctor before playing.

For more information about seizures, contact your doctor or local health authority.

Repetitive motion injuries and eyestrain

Interacting with video games may cause discomfort in the hands, wrists, arms, or eyes. To reduce your chance of injury, consider taking frequent breaks. If you have symptoms of a repetitive motion injury or eyestrain, don’t play until you’re feeling better. If symptoms persist, contact a doctor.

For more information about repetitive motion injuries and eyestrain, contact your doctor or local health authority.

Motion sickness

Some people may experience motion sickness while playing. Several motion-related effects may be disabled in the in-game Options menu, but doing so cannot guarantee you will not experience symptoms. If you become sick, stop playing and refrain from strenuous activity until you have recovered.

Privacy Statement

This game periodically collects and sends analytics data to a remote server. This data is used to measure interest in the game, and inform changes to improve the game (such as difficulty balance.) No effort is made to uniquely identify players of the game.

What Device Data is Collected

• Your IP address (the last two bytes are masked)
  • Your location based on IP address: country, region, city, approximate latitude and longitude
• Date and time of the request
• Screen resolution being used
• Main Language of the browser being used (Accept-Language header)
• User Agent of the browser being used (User-Agent header)
  • From the User-Agent, we detect the browser, operating system, device used (desktop, tablet, mobile, tv, cars, console, etc.), brand and model.

What Game Data is Collected

• Version ID of the game
• If the game is in play test mode
• Current game play time
• Window resolution of the game
• The name of the troop being fought when battles are started, fled, won, or lost
• The ID of the map being loaded
• The stack trace when an error occurs
• The actors in your party, their levels, classes, and equipment
• Your count of some in-game resources, such as hours remaining

How is Data Anonymized?

• The last 2 bytes of your IP address are masked. Geolocation will be inaccurate.
• No information is sent about individual installs and no effort is made to differentiate individual users.

Data Retention

• all visits and actions raw data are deleted after 24 months 10 days.
• all aggregated reports are deleted after 2 years.

Data Erasure Requests

Because all data recorded is anonymized, it cannot be attributed to an individual person. Therefore, there is no way to request download or deletion of an individual person’s data.

EULA

By purchasing and/or downloading and using this Game, you agree, without reservation to be bound by the terms of this EULA. If you do not agree with the terms of this EULA, please do not purchase and/or download and use this Game.

Definitions

In this EULA the expressions below shall have the meaning assigned to them in this clause, unless the context requires otherwise:

• This “Game”: the software application and/or all of the contents of the files and/or other media, including software setup files, licensed to You by the Creator.
• The Game’s “Creator”: Nathan Bolton.
• “Use”: the access, download, install, copy or benefit from using this Game.
• “You”: you, the final and ultimate user of this Game or the authorized representative of a company or other legal entity that will be the final and ultimate user of this Game, and the company or other legal entity that will be the final and ultimate user of this Game, if applicable.

License

1. The Game’s Creator grants You a non-exclusive, non-transferable, limited, revocable license to Use this Game in accordance with this EULA. The Game’s Creator reserves all rights not expressly granted to You.
2. This Game’s Creator is and remains the owner of any intellectual property rights with respect to this Game. You shall not acquire any ownership to this Game as result of Your purchase of or Your Use of this Game.

Disclaimer

1. You Use this Game at Your own risk and the entire risk as to satisfactory quality, performance and accuracy is with You.
2. This Game and accompanying documentation are provided on an “as is” and “as available” basis without warranty – express or implied – of any kind, and the Creator specifically disclaims the warranty of fitness for a particular purpose. No oral or written advice given by the Game’s Creator, its dealers, distributors, agents or employees shall create a warranty or in any way increase the scope of this warranty and You may not rely upon such information or advice.

Liability limitation

This Game’s Creator and any third party that has been involved in the creation, production, or delivery of this Game are under no circumstances liable for consequential or indirect damages (including damage for loss of profit, business interruption, loss of data, and the like arising out of the use or inability to use this Game).

About a year ago, I realized this game project was unsustainable. I should have been aiming for a minimum viable product, so I could play through it and evaluate the ideas I was putting into the game. Instead, I kept changing the features on a whim, and re-balancing the minutiae despite not having an idea of the bigger picture. This game would never be finished.

So, I decided to make three games instead of one.

And then there were three

In a way, it’s more work – but it’s a necessary step to releasing a finished project. Each game concept is focused. By completing smaller projects and working my way up in complexity, I’ll be able to learn how to successfully complete a game without feature bloat.

Here are my concepts:

1. The Club

In this world, there are cliques and cliches.

The DJ at your local gay club is possessed by a demon!

… Or something like that.

The point is, he won’t accept your song suggestions.

Win as many people onto your side as possible and confront the DJ!

Style

• Comedic, irreverent
• Neon colours
• Chiptune dance music

Gameplay

• Goal: Recruit as many party members as you can, and then challenge the boss
• Start with a randomized party
  • 1 of each class
  • random character names
  • random equipment
• Item descriptions are silly
• Recruit new party members
  • By winning them over with a rock-paper-scissors dialog system
  • Or recruit them in battle (on the dance floor) by using moves that boost their Climax
• Combat
  • Simple, turn-based
  • Recruit enemies by boosting their Climax
  • Or quickly send them home by chipping away at their Stamina
• 4 character classes
  • Jock
  • Twink
  • Bear
  • Queen
• Play time: 10~20 minutes

2. The Mountain

In this world, city states cling to the world’s peaks, and the lands below are swamped with choking miasma.

For short periods, storms sweep away the toxic air. At these times, scavengers from each kingdom must forage for supplies.

Gather 10 rations and 10 salvage. Then return to the mountain plateau before the miasma returns.

Battles with enemies and journeying between areas will each take 1 hour. You have 24 hours to complete your mission.

Style

• Light on story, heavy on mechanics
• Bright, fantasy palette
  • Humanity will be run-down, but nature will be thriving
• Music that evokes mystery

Gameplay

• Focused on a tight time-limit, and meaningful mechanical choices
  • Every meaningful action takes 1 hour from your total 24 hour limit
  • The item economy is tight: you can use a Ration to heal your party, but you need to keep at least 10 rations to complete the game
• Journey down a mountain through a small series of maps, making choices about whether to battle or avoid enemies
  • In future: Possibly expand into a rogue-lite style where you start from scratch at the beginning of the run after each failure – but with character EXP saved
  • In future: Possibly build more maps than absolutely required, so they can randomly shuffled at the beginning of each run, creating a more unique experience
• On-map enemy encounters
  • Transfer to the battle scene when touched
  • Some sort of naturalistic behaviour, not exclusively rushing the player
  • You can hear them before you see them
    • In future: positional sound
• On-map points of interest
  • Luck-based objectives, eg. you encounter a well and can’t tell if it’s dry or not; choose whether to spend 1 hour seeing if there’s anything useful in it
  • Treasure chests
    • Have a chance to be locked and require 1 hour to open
    • Have a chance to be a mimic monster
    • Have a chance to be a straight-up reward at no cost
    • Frequently surrounded by enemies
• Item descriptions hint to a greater backstory of the world
• Combat
  • Turn-based, Action Point (AP) system where characters can take multiple actions per turn
  • Battles will heavily utilize a vertically stacked row system
  • Players can change between rows at any time with a small AP cost
  • Some classes are close-ranged and need to be on the same row as an enemy, while other classes prefer not to be
• 5 character classes
  • Knight – can defend allies on the same row (by drawing enemy aggro and passively reducing damage taken by allies), and knock enemies up or down to other rows
  • Archer – want to climb higher than foes because they get bonus damage from being higher than their targets
  • Mage – has situational spells, like lightning that strikes only the top row; possibility of friendly fire to units on those rows
  • Scholar – causes persistent debuffs to entire rows
  • Medic – heals and supports allies
• Play time: 45~60 minutes

3. The Mines

(aka Silent Ashpit, formerly Four Corners Quest)

In this world…
criminals are used as forced labour.

Descend the mines.
Pay your debt.

Style

• Atmosphere of dread and futility
• Ooky-spooky aesthetic – washed out with pops of red
• Ambient soundtrack

Gameplay

• Combat
  • Turn-based, Action Point (AP) system where characters can take multiple actions per turn
  • Can manipulate the stage: eg. spilling oil, then lighting it on fire
• 4 characters, each with a back-story and narrative goal
  • Focused on money, loyalty, and a buried ancient evil
• Character loyalty system for making choices that line up with the character’s motivations
  • With rewards for making characters loyal to you OR fear you, so it’s not too prescriptive
  • Possibly also an insanity system, so characters you’ve abused too much will have a more negative description of how their lives turned out at the end
• Get to the end via a number of different routes
  • Individualist: Pay off your debt
  • Nihilist: Side with the cultists and unleash a great evil
  • Revolution: Defeat the guards and break out of the work camp
  • Traditionalist: defeat the great evil and lock it away for one more generation
• 4 base character classes, which each have 2 specialized subclasses, for 12 total
  • Cultist (Glass-cannon magic class)
    • Dark Priest
    • Necromancer
  • Sellsword (Well-rounded physical class)
    • Iron Fist
    • Berserker
  • Sawbones (Healing/support class)
    • Mastermind
    • Puppetmaster
  • Thief (Debuffer and pickpocket)
    • Rogue
    • Assassin
• Estus-like healing system
  • You can get 4 rations free each time you exit the dungeon and return to town
    • Can request any combination of healing potions or power-up potions until to 4 total
    • This creates a risk-reward system where players can either power themselves up or heal themselves
• Money is your primary tool for advancement
  • Is used for unlocking plot on one particular path, but it will provide useful rewards even if you’re not perusing that ending
  • EXP may still be used for regular level-ups, but those will be weighted less important than equipment, which will be expensive
  • If you find weapons in the mines, you have to pay to have them identified before they can be used
• Play time: 1~2 hours

I’ve been using a Kanban-style board to keep track of tasks for the project. Having labels for each columns lets me prioritize tasks, and I like the kinetic feeling of dragging a task from one column to another.

But even with this system, my willpower sometimes slips, and I end up working on something fun and frivolous instead of the most practical task to actually get the project completed.